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1. 사회에 기여하는 사람은 매우 많고 그중 과학자들과 예술가들은 매우 중요한 기여를 한다. 나의 생각은 과학자들이 더 많은 기여를 한다고 본다.
2. 인간의 생활을 편리하게 한다.사회를 발전시키는 문명의 이기를 만드는 것은 과학자들이다.
3. 보다 적은 에너지를 사용하여 효율적이게 한다.
4. 인간의 수명을 연장시키는 것과 과학자들의 몫이다.
5. 예술가들도 사람들의 정서생활 등에 많은 기여를 하지만, 그 반면에 인간생활을 편리하게 하고, 인간의 수명을 연장시키고, 보다 적은 에너지를 사용하게 하는 과학자들의 몫이다.

There is so many contributers to our society; the artists will be comfort ourselves by the soft musics, the beautifiul paintings or dancing and so on. And the scientists provide the tools for helping people or technical improvements for human. In my opinion the scientist give more benefits then the artists. The scientist make us mor comfort then before, get more from same amout of energy and they make us to live longer.

At first, the scientists give us many useful thing;tools, machines, cars, telephone and so on. We can move more faster and more feather because they invented car. We can communicate with people who lives far away because of telephone. We can catch a information from all of the world because of the internat. And we can test our English ability using the computer.

And as you know, the oil will be worn out in few decades, it is so important problem to be solved how we can reduce the amount of oil for getting same energy. Many scientists has studying to get way of reducing usage of oil, and how to success to get some energy by wind or water.

So many people want to live longer without pain. Scientists study what is the reason human is mortal, and why all of the creature has to die. And they revealed many things ; the DNA's structure, what is good for health and so on. The artist will give us not longer life but only comfort for mind. On the other hand the scientists advise us what is good for health and what is not good. So they can give us some adivice directly.

The artists give us happiness, the scientists give us comfort and chance to live longer. So I think the scientists are more contribute to our society.